I had crap for a screenplay plan. My idea is now to essentially combine Little Brother with the movie Braveheart. I want to set up the movie back in a time closer to the setting of Braveheart so that there is not a ton of technology and with the characters very upset at how the DHS has been treating them and feeling discouraged. Then I want to make Marcus a war hero like William Wallace, and have him convince the people to go to war with the DHS. It will feature one large battle where they beat the DHS and get their freedom. Before the battle Marcus is going to give an inspirational speech like he does when he gathers the people he and Jolu trust together. Then after the very inspirational speech the fight will start. At the end they will beat the DHS army they are fighting and the DHS will stop oppressing them.