Saturday, December 5, 2009

critical thinking

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the
Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

When first developing the basic ideas and concepts for each website we asked questions regarding who would be reading our website, what information would be most beneficial, what our unique contribution would be to our specific area of interest, and in what way would we want to convey our purposes. By asking these questions and using critical thinking to answer them we were able to better communicate our goals and narrow our direction.

Critical thinking is "the art of thinking about your thinking while you are thinking in order to make your thinking better: more clear, more accurate, or more defensible."
Paul, Binker, Adamson, and Martin (1989)

This definition is the closet to what comes to my mind when trying to define critical thinking. The idea of constantly analyzing our work, in this case hypertexts, we can eliminate the excess information to make our point more clear and accurate and polish the way we relay our information. By continuously seeking improvements we are never settling or stopping progress.

Critical thinking is "the examination and testing of suggested solutions to see whether they will work."
Lindzey, Hall, and Thompson, 1978.

This definition of critical thinking is true when it comes to creating a hypertext because as a creator referencing other websites is very important and beneficial. By evaluating which techniques and methods most effectively convey an author’s purpose, and recognizing the different possibilities in terms of layout, voice, design, etc. it makes it easy to find direction, set goals, and formulate new ideas for your own hypertext.

Critical thinking is the development of cohesive and logical reasoning patterns. Stahl and Stahl, 1991.

Emphasis on cohesion and logical reasoning is important when creating a hypertext because the readers must understand how the information relates and how to navigate through the site without assistance. In order to engage readers and most affectively reach the goal of the individual website, we must be logical in our thinking and consistently keep each page or separate thought relative to the central focus.

Thursday, December 3, 2009

Favorite Websites

My favorite website was Chris Stamas's "New Media Journalism" website. It was visually pleasing with the color scheme making sense with the photography and it all relating to the subject matter. The layout of each page was aligned and the there was a good amount of text on each page. He added plenty of interal and external links that linked to relevant and interesting videos and other websites about his topic.

Melissa Zhao's website about photography is another great hypertext. Her idea is interesting and her passion for photography is evident. She kept her pages organized and the pictures on each page were impressive and well placed.

Michael Adair's low wage hypertext focused on waitressing, specifically single mothers. His fonts and background was unusual but did not distracr from the information on the page. I liked how he seperated the links to the main pages on the top and the source info and review of literature, along with his contact info at the bottom. He also had a guide at the bottom of each page which was helpful when browsing his site.

Wednesday, December 2, 2009

critical thinking

“Critical thinking is the use of those cognitive skills or strategies that increase the probability of a desirable outcome...” –Halpern, Diane F. Thought and Knowledge: An Introduction to Critical Thinking. 1996.
This definition of critical thinking relates to finding sources and reliable information. I had to critically think to find good databases, key words to search, and ways to find information to increase my probability of finding good sources (i.e. the desirable outcome).

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve." – Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.
To create a solution to the issue of housekeeping injuries, I had to understand and evaluate the solutions scholars and others have proposed to help solve the problem and present solutions of my own intermixed with solutions from others. I had to mentally ask questions to figure out good ways to fix the problems with hotel housekeeping.

“…Being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment." – Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.
In my project it was important to make sure I understood the biases and prejudices to make sure my hypertext wasn’t swayed. Not that I have a set bias or prejudice about housekeeping, but while searching articles it was clear that many articles could be biased. In order to be “critically thinking” I needed to be aware of those biases and prejudices.
"Critical thinking includes the ability to respond to material by distinguishing between facts and opinions or personal feelings, judgments and inferences, inductive and deductive arguments, and the objective and subjective. It also includes the ability to generate questions, construct, and recognize the structure of arguments, and adequately support arguments; define, analyze, and devise solutions for problems and issues; sort, organize, classify, correlate, and analyze materials and data; integrate information and see relationships; evaluate information, materials, and data by drawing inferences, arriving at reasonable and informed conclusions, applying understanding and knowledge to new and different problems, developing rational and reasonable interpretations, suspending beliefs and remaining open to new information, methods, cultural systems, values and beliefs and by assimilating information."
MCC General Education Initiatives
A lot of the articles I found about housekeeping had graphs, data, statistics, etc… that I had to critically think about and analyze. To understand them, and interpret their meanings, I had to analyze them, see relationships, organize information, and develop reasonable interpretations…just like this definition of critical thinking says I need to do.

Review of Hypertexts--Lindsey

Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."

Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.

  • From my experience at looking and engaging with various hypertexts online, I have learned that the readers themselves are the only ones who can decide whether or not the information they are reading is true or not.  By publishing something online, you are putting your work out there and in order to maintain trust of your audience must ensure your work is correct and informative.

 

Critical thinking is careful and deliberate determination of whether to accept, reject, or suspend judgment.

Moore and Parker, 1994. 

  • As mentioned previously, the reader is the ultimate judge who gets to decide whether or not they believe what has been published.   The more accurate you are able to make your information the more likely a reader is willing to believe and take in your information seriously.  The primary goal once your work is online is to provide an informative site that engages readers who develop a virtual trust with the author. 

 

Critical thinking is "the art of thinking about your thinking while you are thinking in order to make your thinking better: more clear, more accurate, or more defensible."

Paul, Binker, Adamson, and Martin (1989)

  • When one challenges their own thought, that is truly the essence of critical thinking.  During this past quarter, and especially during the construction of this past research hypertext, I have challenged myself to look at my work in a subjective matter and figure out the best way to support my case.  Previously, after I have written something for an English course, I found it difficult to reanalyze my own writing and renovate my thoughts after conducting a first draft.  However, I have developed the skill of looking over my own and others work in a more subjective manner that allows multiple drafts and alternative ways of finding solutions or other ways of going about writing (ie the new insight/twist to the hypertexts).

 

Critical thinking is "reasonably and reflectively deciding what to believe or do."
Ennis (1985)

  • This mainly is directed towards my most recent work with the research hypertext.  The reflective nature and belief of how an individual can help is a great idea that seems to be more easily said than done.  However, in order to gain backing and support on a matter it takes an individual to get the ball rolling.  My contribution to the educational effect on youth retail workers may seem small but who knows, maybe someone will come across my research and be enlightened to further the research or contribute in their own, personal, unique way.

 

Tuesday, December 1, 2009

Review of Peer Websites

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/MAdair/waitress.htm
One of my favorite Research Hypertext's was Michael Adair's. Not only did he have a very unique and advanced desing, but he displayed the controversy of his topic very well. His website clearly demonstrates the struggles of being a single-mom worker and the numerous psychological problems that come along with it. He also did a great job in providing other aspects of this low-wage lifestlye, such as the role that fathers may play. Overall, I think his website is a very strong example of the difficulties of low-wage work.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/lgrove/homepage%20for%203rd%20hypertext.html
Another one of my favorite Research Hypertext's was Lindsay Grove's. I thought her design was very neat and it was easy to navigate through her site. Her presentation of the material is straight forward and one can get through the website with ease. Her website isn't overly fancy and clustered, which I believe is very important to hypertext design.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/bdonaldson/beerhypersplash.html
Bryan Donaldson's website on "Beer as Slow Food" definitely caught my eye while I was navigating through the websites of the other classes. This topic is very unique and it is interesting to read (especially for college students). He has a very clean design and the colors and pictures he decided to use relate clearly to his topics. He also provides some very significant facts (presented in both percentages and pie charts), which shows that he spent a great amount of time researching this topic and presenting it in a fun way to his readers.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/JHinds/track.htm
The last website I really enjoyed reading was Track and Field Website by Jennifer Hinds. I really liked how she used pictures for her various links. Also, the website was very personal and she related every page to herself and her own experience as a track athlete. Even though I think her website could be improved with a navigation system, I liked how the font was larger and easy to read and how the pictures truly conveyed what she was discussing in the text.

What i like

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jkblack/

The design on this page is very good, and the writing is very interesting. He uses a lot of personal connections to the topic which makes it very personal.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mawong/modelminority/

While the design is very 90’s retro, he uses graphics very well and intersperses text with them to make it stay interesting

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/wburke/Reserch%20Hypertext/reserchhypertextindex.htm

the design is very well done, with a consistent look to it. There is a very direct approach to the argument that will makes, and it is a very easy to understand topic, with very well presented original research. The research on third party involvement is very eye opening.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/SJChen

this site is one of the few that has a very clean consistent design. It is easily readable and well layed out. There is a strong personal connection to the work and the writing is very easy to understand and agree with.

Nice Hypertexts- Julia

Michael Adair He has a very nice layout and design. The colors, buttons, pictures, and text work well together. His topic (the physiological strain of being a waitress and a mother at the same time) is very concise, which I beneficial to further research. His “map” is very efficient.

Francesca Dugan Again, she has an appealing design and layout. Within that, she has a very interesting and controversial topic about the Mexican border. She has great evidence, including her immersion trip. I can see from her previous hypertexts that she made great progress throughout the year.

Woodson Hobbs His homepage for the research hypertext contains a cartoon. This catches peoples attention, while informing people of the problem in a creative, effective way. When you get in to the website, viewers find a plethora of information about a controversial topic.

Josh Ronen He has interesting topics and nice design.

Critical thinking

critical thinking is the formation of logical inferences. - Simon and Kapplan, 1989.
When I was doing research for my third hypertext it required me to think beyond the words and arguments in the article. Using scholarly articles and determining what their argument was and then infer from there what my personal connection to that was, and how I was going to uniquely contribute to it was the most difficult part of the project.

Critical thinking is the development of cohesive and logical reasoning patterns. Stahl and Stahl, 1991.
I tend to think of everything in patterns, so much so that I try to make everything formulaic. In high school I did one type of writing and I mastered that formula. When I entered this course I was thrown off course. I was forced to develop a totally new type of writing. It took a lot of reading and researching and looking at other classmates work I began to see the patterns in their websites and the types of rhetoric that they used.
Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.
This quote seems very relivant to my experiences with the 3rd hypertext. I found myself arguing something that I do not exactly believe to be true. However, doing so what an exercise for my mind.

Perfect Hypertext's - Allison

Briana MacDonald – Her Housekeeping website is very inspiring. This is because she has a great design and it’s enjoyable to navigate. Not only is the design good, but her content as well. She makes note of the issue and provides her own original contribution that seems to be helpful solutions. I think I will be more away of housekeepers the next time I stay at a hotel because of her website.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/BMacDonald/lowwagelife.htm
Carmen Ward – Her Photography website was so artistic – I really love it. I’ve always wanted to know more about photography and this is a great insight to the many wonders that it creates. I love so many of the pictures and want to learn how to take photographs like that.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/CWard/
Kristen Ryder’s – Parkinson’s Disease hypertext is very inspiring. Not only does it make me want to take action, but it is also a great website. The design is very interesting and she uses all aspects of dream weaver. The website is very informational and perfect in all aspects.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kryder/parkinsonshome.html
Mike Wong’s – His hypertext on technology and culture was excellent. It was well thought out and the design was very advanced. By creating many links in his text it was easy to navigate and learn all he had to offer. I found his one page regarding social networking to be very interesting and though provoking.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mawong/hypertext2/socialnetworking.html

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/lbiddle/civic_engagement.html

This website works well because it the author has some personal experience in the field, so therefore she must know a lot about what she it talking about in her project. I also think that she does a good job of breaking down the job she is discussing so that it flows easier.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kquist/

The author does a good job of presenting the information so that it is easy to understand. Also, the author uses some interesting images that help gain the readers attention, and makes the reader want to understand what she is talking about.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/MAdair/

The author does a great job with their hypertext because they have clearly done a lot of research on their topic due to all of the pages that they have on their site. Also, the word art on the pages looks really good on the pages.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/AAgcaoili/

The author does a good job by taking a very serious tone in their research hypertext, which makes the readers want to keep reading. Also the color scheme is very colorful which attracts the eyes of the reader.

Most Effective Hypertexts

Chris Samas
This website provided useful pictures and good graphic design that was easy to navigate and aesthetically pleasing. It also provided useful information and was well researched and written.

Katie Ranney
I really like the layout of this website, i think it made it a lot easier to understand the point that Katie was trying to get and successfully communicated the problems she was addressing.

Julia Mink
Julia used great fonts and media to elaborate the trials of low-wage motherhood. Although some of her tabs were a bit hard to read, i sitll found it easy to navigate throughout the page.

Josh Ronen
This website seemed interesting to me because of how much it applied to my life. I liked how Josh chose a topic that should catch every students attention and brought forth a fact that other may not necessarily know about.

4 Websites

1. http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/AAgcaoili/filipinonanny.html

I believe this webpage successfully accomplishes this project because it speaks about nanny's and how they struggle in their life. The design of the webpage goes with the topic the person is portraying. The design of the webpage is very good, and has a good use of colors and buttons for the links. The webpage is very well organized.

2. http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/DGreen/researchhypertext/researchindex.html

This website is very good to show the problem in a low wage life and talks about it very good. The design of the webpage is very good, and the colors are all easily readable. The details in each of the pages catches the audience's eye because the topic is very interesting. The writing in each of the pages seem to all have a passion to which it shows.

3.http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/multimedialearning/wkwok/index.html

This webpage captures my attention because of the passionate writing that it includes. The colors used all lure the audience into the webpage in order to caputre the reader. The links are all easily guidable and the webpage is simple to use without any trouble.

4.http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/multimedialearning/22quixote/index.html

I really like this webpage because from the first page that comes up, the image captures the audience, and makes them want to know more. The writing in the webpage is very good and talks about the certain points that are very important. The font is easily readable which is very good, and the colors chosen go with the topic. The font used for the headers are very well chosen to the topic it is explaining.

4 Websites

1. http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/AAgcaoili/filipinonanny.html

I believe this webpage successfully accomplishes this project because it speaks about nanny's and how they struggle in their life. The design of the webpage goes with the topic the person is portraying. The design of the webpage is very good, and has a good use of colors and buttons for the links. The webpage is very well organized.

2. http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/DGreen/researchhypertext/researchindex.html

This website is very good to show the problem in a low wage life and talks about it very good. The design of the webpage is very good, and the colors are all easily readable. The details in each of the pages catches the audience's eye because the topic is very interesting. The writing in each of the pages seem to all have a passion to which it shows.

3.http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/multimedialearning/wkwok/index.html

This webpage captures my attention because of the passionate writing that it includes. The colors used all lure the audience into the webpage in order to caputre the reader. The links are all easily guidable and the webpage is simple to use without any trouble.

4.http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/multimedialearning/22quixote/index.html

I really like this webpage because from the first page that comes up, the image captures the audience, and makes them want to know more. The writing in the webpage is very good and talks about the certain points that are very important. The font is easily readable which is very good, and the colors chosen go with the topic. The font used for the headers are very well chosen to the topic it is explaining.

Websites I like

1. Will Burke: Targeted Youth

The website is nicely organized and simple. I like it because the design works well with the topic. The links are bolded after you click them which I think looks cool. He also found some good examples and pictures to go with fast food and youth employment.

2. Josh Ronen: College Apparel

Like we said in class, I like how his website has a lot of pictures and everything seems very balanced. The side links are very long, but they work in this case because you know exactly where you are clicking and the question he will write about. The font goes well, and the writing looks very complete.

Websites I Like


I like this website ebcause it is very organized and straight forward. He addresses the problem, his expereince, and a solution in a very orderly manner. It makes it easy to see the point of his website and understand it. I like how he kept the review of the literature, printable essay, and bibliography at the bottom of the page and spereate from his other links. I really like his design and layout. I might want to encorporate some of his simple design into my own website.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mmooney/childhood.htm
I also like this website because of it's design. They change the font and make it visually appealing.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/DGreen/researchhypertext/researchindex.html
I like this website because it looks professional and has a good layout as well. It kind of resembles a blog in a sense, which adds a different feel to the website (not a lot of people have done a layout like that)

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mgaletto/Research%20Hypertext%20Homepage.html
I like this website because it uses pictures really well to add to the site. The links inside the text work for this website because the paragraphs aren't too big. I like how she did that.


Effective/Engaging Hypertexts

Bonnie Given's first original hypertext on homosexuality was fascinating. While I do not know a lot of homosexual individuals I found this hypertext an interesting, organized, and informative piece that provided real life accounts that made a stronger impact that brought to light the importance of accepting people who may be considered different in society.

Andrew Agcaoilis "I Resign" hypertext was very innovative and provided a lot of information jam packed into one website. However, this did not appear to simply be ONE website. I thouroughly enjoyed his idea of creating two worlds in one hyptertext and generating contrasting thoughts that seemed to diverege not only in the material provided but in the site as well.

Margaret Hooper's hypertext on social networking sites was very compelling. I found this to be a great topic because it impacts and effects today's society--specifically our generation. The site posed relavent issues resulting from social networking sites and offered graphs and other statistical evidence to support her case.\

Mike Wong's hypertext on "The model minority" was very interesting and you could tell there was a strong personal investment in the work he did. His use of personal media and personal contribution made his work that much more engaging and his site was well organized.

Websites I like

Kelly Quist - World of Warcraft

I like her site because, like her, I like world of warcraft...just a little bit more secretly. I think it's cool that she discusses gender roles online and in MMORPGs and I respect her for doing her site on the topic because it is a very interesting topic but also one that I feel like not a lot of girls would choose. It's very original and an interesting read and she makes it fun. The navigation on the site needs a bit of improvement because I found myself getting lost and searching for very specific links hidden within bodies of text that could not otherwise be accessed.

Mark Wong - The Model Minority Myth

A very impressive website. Good design with lots of links pages and writing. I felt like there were tons of links embedded in the text to click on that would take me to different pages that I hadn't seen before. It had good navigation and consistent layout which was pleasant. He used a wide variety of images that were both effective and complemented the site well. The content was personal and very interesting - a topic I was not very familiar with before reading.


Websites I like

Lindsey Grove: her website is clean, not too busy, and easy too read.
Michael Adair: I like his website a lot for similar reasons as lindsey's. I like the uniformity from page to page and the topic is very appealing to me. he incorporated interestign knowledge and prespectives. it has TONS of different links wtih so much information
Patrick Broocock: his website is very organized on teh left side and there are not big bunches of text that are overwhelming, pictures are engaging
Child Labor: I was immediately drwan to this because of the changing picture and the first sentence that says "chances are you do not know who we are" and I immediately clicked on teh who we are link and was brought to another page with picturtes that made em so interested to figure out who they are. That type of rhetoric is engaging and exciting and made em want to learn more.

Critical Thinking quotes and 4 websites

Critical thinking is careful and deliberate determination of whether to accept, reject, or suspend judgment.
Moore and Parker, 1994.
This quote definitely relates to what I've learned about composing hypertext, especially the second analytical hypertext, because that quote was all your own personal opinion on a subject, namely what you were resigning from. My experience in writing that hypertext was that I was much more introspective on the topic after I had written it and really thought about the issue. I was pretty dead set on what my judgement was at the beginning of the website, but by the end, simply through my own analysis of the issue (the issue I had in the second website) my judgement and thinking hadn't necessarily switched, but I had done enough picking of my own brain that I had a lot more backup to what my judgement was in the first place. However, I also was much better at seeing the other side of the issue.
Critical thinking is "reasonably and reflectively deciding what to believe or do."
Ennis (1985)
This quote, like the first one, relates to my second hypertext in that it involves deciding what to believe about a certain topic, and my second topic is the topic where I really became introspective and improved on my beliefs by critically analyzing my own decisions and my own beliefs.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/BRebboah/Low%20wages%20and%20sports.html
I like this low wage hypertext because of the layout and the way he presents the issue. He also does a good job of making sure his research is put to use in his website, citing it multiple times.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jronen/LowWageHome.htm
I really like Josh's low wage hypertext website because it is one of the most clear to peruse. It is also a really cool, original topic to do, and it connects to us in a very real way.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/bdonaldson/teachingsplash.html
I like Bryan Donaldson's hypertext about teaching because he did a very good job of using all the sources he had at his disposal. I also like the layout because it is very simple.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kmarume/sexual%20exploitation%20splash.html
I like Katrina Marume's website of sexual exploitation of women in media because it is a very interesting topic, one that it took some courage to do because it is a major dividing issue between people. I also really like the layout because it is simple but gets the point across well.
Erin Ching
I like Erin's website a lot because of the organized layout of the pages, as well as the colorful background and pictures. It makes the website very appealing to look at and read. I also like the links to other websites.

Rena Pompa
Rena's website looks very professional. I really like the look of her website. The templates and different tables make the website look very organized.

Katie Bobbin
I like Katie's websites because she does things that I feel like I could use to improve my sites. She does a great job of giving her websites some texture through the backgrounds and fonts. She also uses more emotionally-provoking images in her sites.

Briana MacDonald

Surveying Other 4 Other Sites

1. Katherine Quinn-Shea

I admire the effort put it in each of the 4 websites she made. She even made a a very appealing website voluntarily to advertise her campaign for the Vice Presidency last year.


The use of color in her tables to sequester off the tables on the page to make it easier for the reader was very nicely done. The website was very easy to navigate and read. The information was informative, straightforward, and to the point. The images/videos used fit in perfectly with her message and in the overall structure of each site she made.


Rebecca's research hypertext is very simple, yet very easy to navigate and well put together. The use of the flash buttons along the top compliments the structure of each page she created very nicely. The fonts that she used, from a font image creator, fit very well in her site. Some fonts people choose may not necessarily contribute to the overall message that the site conveys but hers does very well. Her use of videos and images fits into each of her pages very well. The pages are "symmetrical" which makes if very easy to read.


Julia's research hypertext used a combination of everything that we have learned in this class up to this point: flash buttons, adding images and videos, and creating font images on outside websites. She has a powerful message in her work that makes she put a lot of time and effort into her work, very admirable!

Critical Thinking

Critical thinking is "a process which stresses an attitude of suspended judgment, incorporates logical inquiry and problem solving, and leads to an evaluative decision or action."
NCTE Committee on Critical Thinking and the Language Arts.
Whenever I write, I will make an attempt to formulate a logical argument that comes across in an easily digestible manner. I feel that this method of writing will get across my point the best way, while still being able to utilise my natural skills and talents that I have with problem solving.
“Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.
Through my research hypertext, I try to get the reader to go through the process of critical thinking. By trying to evoke this, I am attempting to get the reader to follow a process of logical reasoning to bring them to a point where they have made a decision based on the facts that I have presented them. I do present opinions of mine in my hypertext, however I leave it up to the reader completely to make a decision whether or not they agree with me.
Critical thinking is the development of cohesive and logical reasoning patterns. Stahl and Stahl, 1991.
I try to stay consistent in my writing and design. All of my pages that I have written are have the same look and feel, with the same navigation bar and document header on every single page. The writing is also very easy to read whilst jumping from page to page, because it has recognisable repetitive methods of writing. The best example of this would be in my today and tomorrow sections. I have split up the choices into sections that are the same in both the today and tomorrow sections, therefore allowing the reader to understand my point better.

Julia's Criticial Thinking

Critical thinking is careful and deliberate determination of whether to accept, reject, or suspend judgment.
Moore and Parker, 1994.
From my experience of creating a hypertext, the process is very careful and deliberate and entails a lot of decision making directly related to judgement.

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.
As writers, we started with a question or problem and come to a conclusion or solution to that question or problem. I think this process is very helpful and can create a very successful hypertext, or any paper therefore. We also went through the process of achieving understanding, evaluating view points, and problem solving, which was very effective for me.

"Critical thinking includes the ability to respond to material by distinguishing between facts and opinions or personal feelings, judgments and inferences, inductive and deductive arguments, and the objective and subjective. It also includes the ability to generate questions, construct, and recognize the structure of arguments, and adequately support arguments; define, analyze, and devise solutions for problems and issues; sort, organize, classify, correlate, and analyze materials and data; integrate information and see relationships; evaluate information, materials, and data by drawing inferences, arriving at reasonable and informed conclusions, applying understanding and knowledge to new and different problems, developing rational and reasonable interpretations, suspending beliefs and remaining open to new information, methods, cultural systems, values and beliefs and by assimilating information."
MCC General Education Initiative.
For two of our hypertexts, we had to sort of ignore opinion and just go with reason. For our “I Resign” hypertext, it was mainly opinion based. This gave dimension to our ability to learn about the arguments. Organizing materials and data was very important for our hypertexts as well.

Will Lynch Critical Thinking

Do any of the descriptions of "critical thinking" described below apply to your experience of composing hypertext? If so, which ones? Why? Specifically, which aspects of the composing process are most relevant to which parts of the "critical thinking" process? Does your engagement in these elements differ in some ways from your writing habits before you took this class or composed hypertextually?


Close to all of these definitions of critical thinking were required when I was writing my hypertext. At first I had great difficulty finding things to write, I only had a very vague sense of what my topic was about. As I researched and read more about my topic however, I began to think about how my research pointed towards a certain debate and how they differed. It wasn’t until I started actually started absorbing and understanding this research that I was able to have “formations of logical inferences” as Simon and Kapplan said critical thinking is. What helped me the most was making detailed annotations of my research and compiling it all together in my literature review. After that it wasn’t all that difficult because all the hard work was done. All my thoughts on what I wanted my hypertext to be about had already been put down in my review. Writing hypertextually has been a very different experience from traditional writing. It has taken me a while to get used to it and trust the process of creating a hypertext. I realized that hypertexts are not read linearly and therefore should not be written in that manner. Writing a 2000 word paper and then chopping it up and putting them on different pages does not then make it a hypertext. By the final hypertext however I did not do this. I researched and annotated, wrote a review which helped me figure out what I wanted my hypertext to be about then outlined how my website would show this. I have no single word document with all my words on the entire site that I transferred to Dreamweaver, instead I have many different pages split into sections that if copy and pasted into one document would not read like a linear essay. What I found was most useful about this was that I had no single idea that I was trying to prove by asking my readers read from start to finish. I now have many different ideas that all pertains to my topic but coming from different directions.

Critical Thinking - Allison

Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.

  • I think this definition is very accurate regarding hypertexts. It’s like the debate about Wikipedia. When looking at a website you need to evaluate information and look at it from a reasonable perspective. Does the information look reliable? That’s a critical thinking skill of deciding rationally what to or what nor to believe.

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

  • I think an important part of critical thinking is to evaluate view points and solve problems. In doing so one must be open minded. In creating my hypertexts this quarter I think that it was very important to evaluate different view points and find solutions or solve problems to the question that you were investigating. Similarly in researching something we seek to understand both sides of a problem, evaluate what it is and try to resolve it. This is a good description of the assignment of our last hypertext.

Critical thinking is "a process which stresses an attitude of suspended judgment, incorporates logical inquiry and problem solving, and leads to an evaluative decision or action."
NCTE Committee on Critical Thinking and the Language Arts.

  • From my experience I think critical thinking is a process and a skill that needs to be developed. Over time I’ve learned how to think critically, but when I was younger I had a difficult time doing so because I couldn’t see the big picture or different viewpoints. Now in creating hypertexts I think that our websites are very important in incorporating a logical inquiry. As we’ve been working on in class – what does our website have to offer? It should offer a problem to the solution or a judgment that’s a different point of view from many others.

"Broadly speaking, critical thinking is concerned with reason, intellectual honesty, and open-mindedness, as opposed too emotionalism, intellectual laziness, and closed-mindedness. Thus, critical thinking involves: following evidence where it leads; considering all possibilities; relying on reason rather than emotion; being precise; considering a variety of possible viewpoints and explanations; weighing the effects of motives and biases; being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right; not rejecting unpopular views out of hand; being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment."
Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.

  • As I’ve discussed in previous responses, critical thinking involves multiple concepts. These concepts are mainly seeing variety of viewpoints, weighing biases as well as being concerned with finding the truth. By being an investigator and thinking critically, I have found interest in research and inquiries when it comes to brainstorming a topic for my hypertexts. I like the part of the definition that states “being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right.” This I because it is not about your opinion or bias or thinking you knowing the best solution – its finding the truth to whatever topic you are researching.

    Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
    Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.

    • I think this definition is very accurate regarding hypertexts. It’s like the debate about Wikipedia. When looking at a website you need to evaluate information and look at it from a reasonable perspective. Does the information look reliable? That’s a critical thinking skill of deciding rationally what to or what nor to believe.

    "The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
    Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

    • I think an important part of critical thinking is to evaluate view points and solve problems. In doing so one must be open minded. In creating my hypertexts this quarter I think that it was very important to evaluate different view points and find solutions or solve problems to the question that you were investigating. Similarly in researching something we seek to understand both sides of a problem, evaluate what it is and try to resolve it. This is a good description of the assignment of our last hypertext.

    Critical thinking is "a process which stresses an attitude of suspended judgment, incorporates logical inquiry and problem solving, and leads to an evaluative decision or action."
    NCTE Committee on Critical Thinking and the Language Arts.

    • From my experience I think critical thinking is a process and a skill that needs to be developed. Over time I’ve learned how to think critically, but when I was younger I had a difficult time doing so because I couldn’t see the big picture or different viewpoints. Now in creating hypertexts I think that our websites are very important in incorporating a logical inquiry. As we’ve been working on in class – what does our website have to offer? It should offer a problem to the solution or a judgment that’s a different point of view from many others.

    "Broadly speaking, critical thinking is concerned with reason, intellectual honesty, and open-mindedness, as opposed too emotionalism, intellectual laziness, and closed-mindedness. Thus, critical thinking involves: following evidence where it leads; considering all possibilities; relying on reason rather than emotion; being precise; considering a variety of possible viewpoints and explanations; weighing the effects of motives and biases; being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right; not rejecting unpopular views out of hand; being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment."
    Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.

    • As I’ve discussed in previous responses, critical thinking involves multiple concepts. These concepts are mainly seeing variety of viewpoints, weighing biases as well as being concerned with finding the truth. By being an investigator and thinking critically, I have found interest in research and inquiries when it comes to brainstorming a topic for my hypertexts. I like the part of the definition that states “being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right.” This I because it is not about your opinion or bias or thinking you knowing the best solution – its finding the truth to whatever topic you are researching.

Critical thinking is "a process which stresses an attitude of suspended judgment, incorporates logical inquiry and problem solving, and leads to an evaluative decision or action."
NCTE Committee on Critical Thinking and the Language Arts.

In most people’s research hypertext they are discussing different problems that exist in low wage labor by addressing different low wage jobs. In all of the different ideas that are presented on how to fix certain issues, there has been a great deal of problem solving in order to try and determine what the best solution is for the problem. It is my job in making the hypertext to try and eliminate some of the ideas that won’t work in fixing this issue.

Critical thinking is "the examination and testing of suggested solutions to see whether they will work."
Lindzey, Hall, and Thompson, 1978.

In doing the research hypertext, through all of the research that I have conducted there have been many different things suggested for how to solve different issues. My topic involved illegal immigrants in the landscaping industry and there are many differing opinions on what to do about the immigration issue. However through my research many times it seems as though there are problems with all of the different theories, which is why many of them haven’t been implemented by the government.

Critical thinking is careful and deliberate determination of whether to accept, reject, or suspend judgment.
Moore and Parker, 1994.

This quote makes me think about the conversation that we had in class about objectivity and whether or not it is obtainable. While doing the research hypertext about living the low wage life it makes me think about how these people are so unfortunate and that there are so many problems in so many different areas. However, while doing all of the hypertexts it is important to remember to stay as objective as possible when presenting the facts so that I Remain as objective as possible when making my websites.

Critical Thinking-Rebecca Murillo

Both the Kurland and the MCC examples applied to my personal process in making this hypertext. When creating this hypertext, I began to read plenty of sources in order to become more educated on the topics in which I was going to discuss in my hypertext. I believed that in order to arrive at a conclusion that would prove beneficial to my learning experience and to those who read my hypertext, I was going to have to do plenty of research. Once I began writing I began to break apart what I had read and piece the most important facts together, while also using the information to make inferences about the future of low wage workers. I was able to effectively organize my website and to keep my own personal opinions out of the pages that were created strictly to inform. The most important aspects involved in critical thinking are being able to separate your own opinions from the facts and from the facts you have obtained, be able to provide your own personal input and arrive at a stage of original. I believe I am better able to arrive at my own original thought quicker than I had been on the past. By writing these hypertext websites about things that apply to my own life, I have been better able to apply everything that we read in class to my personal experiences.

Critical thinking selections-William Burke

Using skills that are thoughtful and effective for the particular context and type of thinking task -Halpern

As i've been doing my websites, I’ve been reminding myself to think contextually in terms of the problem i'm addressing, and the manner in which I am addressing it. In each project it’s been important to think about the people who are actually going to be reading it.

The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. -Maiorana

Most relevant in this excerpt is the “evaluate and solve” which sounded incredible reminiscent of our most recent project, and is very much the way I looked at it too. In terms of the scholarly literature, I think that “evaluate” is really the best way to put it, and personally I my “solve” was to show that there was a problem in the first place.

Thus, critical thinking involves: following evidence where it leads; considering all possibilities; relying on reason rather than emotion. –Kurland

I try to use this approach in everything I do, but especially in research, I think it is critical to try to separate reason and fact (or supposed fact) from opinion and emotion. In our first project, the goal was for opinion and emotion, but that still required the separation of the two.

Leads to an evaluative decision or action-NCTE

This is how I thought of the conclusion for our most recent project. I came to more of a decision than action, but the decision is reached through the creation of media and highlighting of other media.

Critical Thinking

Do any of the descriptions of "critical thinking" described below apply to your experience of composing hypertext? If so, which ones? Why?

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve." 
Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

Critical thinking is "the examination and testing of suggested solutions to see whether they will work." 
Lindzey, Hall, and Thompson, 1978.

Critical thinking is "the art of thinking about your thinking while you are thinking in order to make your thinking better: more clear, more accurate, or more defensible." 
Paul, Binker, Adamson, and Martin (1989)

Each of the descriptions listed adds its own unique and important piece to the puzzle that is trying to define what exactly “critical thinking” is. I found that after reading through them all, the above three stood out to me as especially relevant to the process I went through when writing my research hypertext. I found that, with what I felt like was critical thinking for myself, I was able to achieve a very focused mindset in which I would critique my own thoughts and ideas in my head over and over again until I had distilled them into what I thought were the most important and effective things to write.

Specifically, which aspects of the composing process are most relevant to which parts of the "critical thinking" process?

I would often find myself coming up with ideas for ways to solve writing problems or clarity problems in my research hypertext writing. I was thinking of ways in my head that if I were reading my own writing how I would perceive it and how it would be useful to me as an online source. One of the most difficult parts was trying to overcome the difficulties of thinking ahead the entire writing and giving myself a mental outline of what was to come. I tried to keep a clear mind with some loose guidelines for my project so that the links from page to page within my writing would flow freely and I found that I was coming across the important topics that I needed as I went. In this way I feel as though my writing was more relevant and fresh and didn’t feel like it had been molded.

Does your engagement in these elements differ in some ways from your writing habits before you took this class or composed hypertextually?

Before I took this class I thought in a very standard essay-writing format. I would think out the usual thesis statement then intro, body paragraphs, etc. It was very structured and designed really only for a teacher to read and grade. The type of writing that I have to come learn (and love) in this class lets me think about my writing in a whole new way. I now feel as though I see my writing as affecting people and I write with the mindset that it has to be easy to read with links to many subtopics in a far less formal format and a structure that opens up a whole new world of writing.

Critical Thinking Exercises

"Broadly speaking, critical thinking is concerned with reason, intellectual honesty, and open-mindedness, as opposed too emotionalism, intellectual laziness, and closed-mindedness. Thus, critical thinking involves: following evidence where it leads; considering all possibilities; relying on reason rather than emotion; being precise; considering a variety of possible viewpoints and explanations; weighing the effects of motives and biases; being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right; not rejecting unpopular views out of hand; being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment."

Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.

In the process of making a website, the creator must be open to understanding the fact that imagination is key to designing a website. You probably will have to change up your design many times to fit your liking. Expecting that you will learn more to incorporate into your website along the way, there will be endless possibilities in when it comes to adding little interesting things here and there. Personally for me, I focus on getting the material for all of my pages planned out first and then working on adding pictures, videos, etc...I want to make sure that I have the content of my websites worked out before really letting my imagination run wild on the rest of my website’s design. One idea that you might get in the process of making a website might spark a chain reaction which forces you to change things about your website that you once thought would be a great final product. Don’t limit yourself or else you won’t be able to see the extent of your own creativity.

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Critical thinking is "a process which stresses an attitude of suspended judgment, incorporates logical inquiry and problem solving, and leads to an evaluative decision or action."
NCTE Committee on Critical Thinking and the Language Arts.

In the process of gathering research for my websites, I need to gather most of my information from scholarly sources or sites that I springboard from off of Google. This research is two-pronged. For scholarly research, you need to make sure that you get the articles off a (library) databases that have thousands of articles from scholarly journals, text that has been constantly judged and criticized. Google searches are at your own discretion. For one of my websites, I used Google as my first resource for research just to get the outside point of view, limitless (opinionated, possibly biased) because scholarly research is much more focused, less opinionated, and has much less bias.

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Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45

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Critical thinking in the process of making my hypertexts plays as big of a part as I wanted it to be. Critical thinking can turn into being the source of the author’s creativity. Composing hypertexts can only go so far if the author is trying so hard to please future readers and not get in trouble with people that might disagree with material on the site. I knew what message I wanted to convey in the process of creating each and every one of my hypertexts and ran with it. I can’t afford to get stuck and lag. By pushing myself forward, I can clear my mind and come up with new ideas that can contribute to the already positively developing nature of my website. I can’t let myself think too much what people will think of my sites. I can only follow the rules I have learned, common sense. I focus my attention on what I know would possibly be criticized the most and use other pages (with creative insight and research) to support it. I have to feel comfortable with my work in order to be able to turn it in. An unfinished piece, in my mind, will not be beneficial to myself or my future readers. I want them to believe what I have to convey in the overall messages of each and every one of my websites.

Critical Thinking

-Critical thinking is the development of cohesive and logical reasoning patterns. Stahl and Stahl, 1991.
When creating a hypertext online for more than one audience, you must create your thoughts in a logical reasoning pattern in order for the people to truly understand what you are trying to convey. If the words you have on your website does not have any cohesive structure to it, then the person reading it and who is trying to understand it will have much trouble doing so. I did this when dealing with my personal website because I tried to have short passages in each of the pages so that the person reading it would easily understand what I was saying.

-"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

I used this critical thinking when composing my last hypertext. In order to show the struggles of the people in the low wage life I had to understand truly what the reason why they did this. Soon after i was able to evaluate what was the true reasons and causes so that I could create what I needed for my website.

-Critical thinking is "the art of thinking about your thinking while you are thinking in order to make your thinking better: more clear, more accurate, or more defensible."
Paul, Binker, Adamson, and Martin (1989)

I applied this critical thinking when doing my website because when I would think of writing something, I would try to spend more time thinking on it to make sure that I was understanding it correctly. Applying more time into thinking allowed me to express what I was truly wanting to say to the people reading my website.

-Critical thinking is deciding rationally what to or what not to believe."
Norris, Stephen P. "Synthesis of Research on Critical Thinking. Educational Leadership, v 42 n 8 May 1985. 40-45.

When having a lot of information to look over and putting it into a website, I had to think many times to decide whether what I was reading and then writing was believable to the audience. I had to search through the articles and be able to understand and believe what they were saying to me.

-Critical thinking is careful and deliberate determination of whether to accept, reject, or suspend judgment.
Moore and Parker, 1994.

In my hypertext I had to determine whether to accept what I was writing, and having the audience I am writing for in mind hoping that they as well will accpet what I am trying to tell them.

critical thinking

"Critical thinking is the use of those cognitive skills or strategies that increase the probability of a desirable outcome. It is used to describe thinking that is purposeful, reasoned and goal directed - the kind of thinking involved in solving problems, formulating inferences, calculating likelihoods, and making decisions when the thinker is using skills that are thoughtful and effective for the particular context and type of thinking task. Critical thinking also involves evaluating the thinking process - the reasoning that went into the conclusion we've arrived at the kinds of factors considered in making a decision. Critical thinking is sometimes called directed thinking because it focuses on a desired outcome." 
Halpern, Diane F. Thought and Knowledge: An Introduction to Critical Thinking. 1996.

Critical thinking is "the art of thinking about your thinking while you are thinking in order to make your thinking better: more clear, more accurate, or more defensible." 
Paul, Binker, Adamson, and Martin (1989)

"Broadly speaking, critical thinking is concerned with reason, intellectual honesty, and open-mindedness, as opposed too emotionalism, intellectual laziness, and closed-mindedness. Thus, critical thinking involves: following evidence where it leads; considering all possibilities; relying on reason rather than emotion; being precise; considering a variety of possible viewpoints and explanations; weighing the effects of motives and biases; being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right; not rejecting unpopular views out of hand; being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment." 
Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.




Hypertext writing is different from essay writing in that its audience is intended to be wider and with more variety. In scholarly writing, I only intend for the writing to matter for one person: the professor. In hypertext writing, I actually have to think critically about choosing a topic that I want to write about. It has to be something I care about, and something that perhaps other people may want to care about as well. When looking for sources, I have to separate what I believe is the truth, and what I believe is exaggerated. My writing has to be “purposeful, reasoned and goal directed”, which is why for a hypertext, the topic choice is extremely important, because it is easier to focus on your writing when it matters to you. “Intellectual honesty” is important in hypertext because anyone can have access to it. If you lie in a hypertext the purpose of having a defensible and goal-orientated writing is defeated. While I was writing my research hypertext, I had to constantly ask myself if what I was writing worthwhile, and not a bunch of mumbojumbo. This act of “thinking about [my] thinking in order to make [my] thinking better” made it so the writing wasn't just full of air, repetition, and big vocabulary words, like my scholarly essays tended to be. I had to find a lot of different viewpoints that helped explain my topic, whereas my normal essays were told to only focus on one side of the story or argument. In this way, I can search for the truth, and tell the truth to anyone who reads my writing.

4 Other Peoples' Websites

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jdrimmer/sexualharasshomepage.html
I liked this website because it has a clear message and it is carried through the theme of the pages. The colors are very effective in sending the message of danger. Also the information is presented clearly and in a way so that you can get the most important information first. The pictures and titles add to the understanding of the topic of each page. The links are very helpful for navigating the site.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/BGiven/Housekeeping.htm
I like the clarity of this website. It is easy to navigate through it and the information is clearly presented. The titles and links are informative and important and add to the overall comprehension of the site.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/sglee1/civicsplash.html
I like the layout of this website. It is clean and easy to use. The color scheme goes with the theme of the site. The information was presented on pages that had very focused topics and it was easy to find the information you wanted.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/akumasaka/The%20Hawaiian%20Nation.html
I like the layout of this website. I think that the different sections of each page makes it easy to read and use. Also the different pictures and titles enhance the understanding of the topic and are very pertinent.

websites i like

Michael Adair:
I like this website because his background is relevant to the issue and goes with the theme of the hypertext. He has a lot of very good information that is important and informative. It is also easy to follow and has good images.

Marie Galetto:
Her website has really good backgrounds as well as navigation buttons that are relative to the topic. The navigation and layout are simple and easy to follow and the content is very informational.

Katrina Marume:
I really like her analytical hypertext about the sexual exploitation of women in Internet Culture. She chose a really good subject, and she has powerful pictures. I also really enjoy the text colors that she used because they are vibrant and catch peoples attention. The colors also look really good on a black background.

Mike Wong:
I like his website about the model minority myth. It is extremely simple, yet it works with his subject. It is informational, easy to follow, and he has a really good navigation bar. His pictures are powerful and relative.

My Four Websites

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/MAdair/education.htm

The first website I chose was Michael Adair’s website due to the very intricate amount of detailing used as well as the researched and well formatted text. Every part of the website stands out and as the viewer clicks the different links, the detail lures him in more and more to every aspect of the site.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kbobbin/experience.html

The second website I chose was Katie Bobbin’s website. Again, the detailing is very well formatted and intricate. The viewer is automatically lured in from the homepage. Also, the topics are all well researched and supported with good text.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/akumasaka/index.htm

The third website I chose was Audrey’s website because it was created with a lot of passion. Additionally, there is a good amount of detail to lure the viewer in to explore every aspect of the site.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/bdonaldson/

The fourth website I chose was Bryan Donaldson’s website. The thing that really lured me into this site was the passion. He really showed great interest in the topics he chose and created a very intricate and detailed website.

Questions Of Hypertext

What is the problem or conflict in the scholarly literature that my project is adressing?

The issue my problem is addressing is that of low wages resulting in meager living conditions for migrant farm workers in farm worker communities.


What is the original contribution that my website is making to that specific problem or conflict?

My original contribution is to present the lives of migrant farm workers to the readers in a personal matter. I will also show how raising the price of food can serve as a solution to the low wages of migrant farm workers.


What are the conceptual tools that I am bringing to the analyses from the assigned course reading?
I am using the concepts of:

-showing the distinct relationship between low wages and a lower quality of life
-employers holding a disregard for employees
-presenting children in the workforce
-sustainability is not capable with such low wages


Which two or three prior student websites provided me with the most guidance?

The two prior websites that proved most useful to me were the low wage life of strippers and the migrant child labor sweatshops. They helped me in both format and in examples of the literature review and the annotated bibliography.

influences of michael adair

Julia Drimmer: http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jdrimmer/sexualharasshomepage.html

Julia Drimmer's research hypertext page is extremely grabbing. It discusses the idea of sexual harrassment of teenage girls in the workplace. It follows the KISS rule - Keep It Simple Stupid. The red black and white color scheme keeps it relaly interesting, while the navigation is quite easy to use.

Katie Bobbin: http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kbobbin/retailworkers.html

In Katie Bobbin's Research Hypertext, The aspect of Katie's page that I like the most is her navigation set-up.It is easy to use and conveniently located on the left side of the screen so that you are constantly exposed to links. Her topic is interesting, and she has a great use of color and images to pull the viewer in.

Jackie Lynch: http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jmlynch/drugviolence%20homepage.htm

In Jackie Lynch’s hypertext about drugs and violence, the pictures are startlingly powerful. She presents them in such a way that the viewer is entranced by the images. However, there is no lack of communication, it is immediately understood what the topic is about by just looking at the pictures on the first page. Smoking, gang violence, and drugs are displayed everywhere, which has an immense impact on the viewer.

Mariam Mostamandy: http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mmostamandy/index.htm

In Marian Mostamandy’s page, the design was what struck me. It is easy to navigate with a side navigation bar. The color scheme works quite nicely with a light green and purple contrast between background of the page and the background of the table. The pictures obviously represent what she is trying to display, which is the idea of equality and racism.

good pages

Marie Galeto:
I like Marie's because it's background and buttons really show the theme of the project. It's also really easy to follow and highly informative.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/mgaletto/Research%20Hypertext%20Homepage.html

Kaite Bobbin:
I really like Katie's project becuase it talks about something alot of teens to so it is relative to alot of us now. the colors are all really good together and its super easy to navigate through.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kbobbin/retailworkers.html


Courtney Jaeckels:
I liked Courtney's Machinima essay because it is very easy to read and look at becuase it is simple but also grabs your attention. The navigation is easy to follow through which makes this website perfect for an older person to look at and follow easily. the colors and pictures are also good.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/CJaeckels/machinima.html

John Howard:
I liked John Howards healthcare ethics site because it is simple but still interesting. it has videos and many different pages you can click on and go through but you never lose your place in the site which is good.
http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/jhhoward/healthcare%20ethics.html

Hypertexts that I like -Bri Cassara

Kellie Quist’s hypertext on “Body Image in Teens” (http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/kquist/splash2.html) is great. The font choice is boring, yet everything about her site is still appealing. She chose great pictures, and the links help you easily navigate through her site. She provides a large amount of information, and each site is visually attractive and attention-getting.

Franscesca Dugan’s hypertext on “The Great Wall of Mexico” (http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/fdugan/wall_thewall.htm) is also very great. I really enjoy her color choices. Her website is extremely visually appealing. It’s clear her relation to the topic, because she has links to her immersion trips, etc.

I like Andrew Dugoni’s hypertext (http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/adugoni/reviewofliteraature.html). He incorporates a lot of issues surrounding his topic. His website has a lot of related issues, and would be a great resource to anyone looking to educate themselves on the meat packing industry.

I also enjoy Bonnie Given’s hypertext (http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/BGiven/Grunt%20Work.html). Her website all fits in the window, and the navigation is very clear. Her pictures are interesting, and she brings up a lot of valid arguments regarding housekeepers. I like the fact that she added her personal relation to the topic, as well as different related topics such as “Liberal Women”.

Pages that I Like

Lindsay Grove’s: I like Linsey’s asthetic appeal. I think she has really powerful images and her navigation is very easy to follow. She presents here topic very clearly and in a way that is easy to follow from page to page. Her background and fonts are creative and add to the overall theme of the site.

Bri Cassara’s: I like Bri’s because she has a lot of data. She did a lot of personal interviews which I think adds to her argument. Instead of digging up articles she got first person accounts. Also, she presents it in a way that’s easy to follow.

2 outside of class…

1) I like Erin Ching’s page about censorship and the internet. Not only is it a really interesting topic, but it is presented in a way that is interesting.

2) I like Caliv Ruiz’s not because its very intovative but it has what I think is really good writing. He is able to use almost his printable writing has his pages so that it flows nicely.

Lindsay Grove’s: I like Linsey’s asthetic appeal. I think she has really powerful images and her navigation is very easy to follow. She presents here topic very clearly and in a way that is easy to follow from page to page. Her background and fonts are creative and add to the overall theme of the site.

Bri Cassara’s: I like Bri’s because she has a lot of data. She did a lot of personal interviews which I think adds to her argument. Instead of digging up articles she got first person accounts. Also, she presents it in a way that’s easy to follow.

2 outside of class…

1) I like Erin Ching’s page about censorship and the internet. Not only is it a really interesting topic, but it is presented in a way that is interesting.

2) I like Caliv Ruiz’s not because its very intovative but it has what I think is really good writing. He is able to use almost his printable writing has his pages so that it flows nicely.

Critical Thinking

"The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding, evaluate view points, and solve problems. Since all three areas involve the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve."
-Maiorana, Victor P. Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom. 1992.

This statement relates to my experience of writing a hypertext in that I have chosen to write about social problems, such a migrant farm workers, body image issues of women, and a lack of support and funding for non-profit organizations. My goal in writing these hypertexts was to present view points as well as propose solutions to the problems at hand. In doing so I brought up questions that were associated with the various issues such as the foundation of the issues and how they have progressed.



Critical thinking is "the examination and testing of suggested solutions to see whether they will work."
-Lindzey, Hall, and Thompson, 1978.


This statement relates to my experience of writing hypertexts because it served as my thesis for many of my hypertexts. In writing my hypertexts I presented social issues; however my personal contribution was directly related to the possible solutions of the issues and how effective each solution would be.




[Critical thinking is] being concerned more with finding the truth than with being right; not rejecting unpopular views out of hand; being aware of one's own prejudices and biases, and not allowing them to sway one's judgment."
-Kurland, Daniel J. I Know What It Says . . . What does it Mean? 1995.

This statement relates to my experience of writing hypertext because in writing of social issues, there was often more than one view point and opinion on the issue. Despite my personal beliefs of the subject I was presenting, I tried to include all parties involved in the issue as well as their point of view and stake in the problem in a relatively objective manner.

top picks Andrew Agcaoili

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/ktolentino/linearhypertext.html

This site is sucessful not only because of the design, but also the writing is precise, yet explores many aspects of her topic, cybergenders. She explores the psychological depth, while talking about aestetic shallowness. It is a very well written hypertext.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/CJaeckels/aginginternet.html

This site on aging and interaction with the internet is also good because it paints a picture of something we do not experience. As young people today, we use the internet all the time, yet this site helps us to understand why out grandparents and sometimes even our own parents find it difficult to work something that has become second nature.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/tmallen/lowwagehome.html

Tom's website is another example of great writing. His site allows you to realize that although we have a stereotypical image of a construction worker, the actual story is deeper. He displays how construction workers must constantly be .ware, or else they can die in their everyday workplace. It is precise and informative.

http://webpages.scu.edu/ftp/BCASSARA/poeburton.htm

The writing in bris site helps you to apprecite the two artists she analyzes and compares. This is a well written site.

Critical Thinking - Definitions

After reflecting on the relationship between critically thinking and writing for hypertexts, I believe that Diane Halpern best describes this connection when she states, “[critical thinking] is used to describe thinking that is purposeful, reasoned and goal directed - the kind of thinking involved in solving problems, formulating inferences, calculating likelihoods, and making decisions when the thinker is using skills that are thoughtful and effective for the particular context and type of thinking task” (Halpern, “Thought and Knowledge: An Introduction to Critical Thinking”). In my personal hypertexts – primarily the final hypertext on low wage workers - problem solving and goal-directed writing is at the center of importance. In the spirit of hypertext writing and blogging in general, solving a problem - or at least presenting an issue and elaborating on why and how it needs to be addressed – is for the most part the primary purpose for the creation of such an online medium. In my low wage hypertext, I focused much of my attention on presenting the issue in a dramaticized way (without compromising the importance or seriousness of the issue by any means) so that readers would see the shocking ills in the industry that I chose to profile – a way of inspiring thought in not only myself while creating the hypertext, but also for those who happened to view my website.
A second definition that I connect with is one made by Victor Maiorana, who says, “The purpose of critical thinking is, therefore, to achieve understanding… the asking of questions, we can say that critical thinking is the questioning or inquiry we engage in when we seek to understand, evaluate, or resolve” (Maiorana, “Critical Thinking Across the Curriculum: Building the Analytical Classroom”). One reason for creating the hypertext (in my opinon) was to expand the knowledge that we had on certain issues – a point that goes along with “achieve understanding,” coined by Maiorana. I found that through doing much research and reading Schlosser, Ehrenreich, and Shipler’s novels, my understanding of the issues that I was studying was definitely increased. The last definition that I definitely agreed with was Kurland’s, saying that critical thinking is an effort to provide intellectual honesty, something else that I tried to achieve in my writing. In my hypertext, I wanted to portray the real life situations and struggles of the people working the low wage life, using factual evidence as well as emotion (Kurland says that critical thinking involves “relying on reason rather than emotion,” and I myself tried to follow that model). Thinking, as stated by Professor Bousquet, goes hand in hand with the writing that we delivered in all of our hypertexts – issues are addressed, analyzed, and solutions, for the most part, are suggested.