Thursday, May 6, 2010

Scene-by-Scene ccutting

Scene-by-scene outline

INT. News station—Evening
View is on a news caster, close up on face. He begins story of Marcus and friends. Into to the scenario.

EXT. Cesar Chavez High School—Day time
News caster voice over, continuing story.

INT. News station—Evening
View is on a news caster, waste up, continuing story.

EXT. Outside—Daytime
Interview with Darrel, two shot from behind reporters shoulder, discus how it began. Somber mood, set in shade under a tree.

INT. News station—Evening
Side angle on news caster, transition to teacher/ administration side. Discussing ramification on the school and how they reacted.

EXT. Cesar Chavez High School —Daytime
News caster reporting outside of the school, discussing actions of the school, how the administration sent notification to colleges and response from them.

EXT. Outside—Daytime
Single shot of Van, she explains how they were only trying to make a point. Shot moves to a two shot interview, interviewer asks what she will do next.

EXT. Outside—Daytime
Overview of the four students talking about what happened and how it got started. They discuss why they did it and how no one will listen and they are stuck with a bad teacher.

INT. News station—Evening
News caster wraps up the story and signs out for the night.

Black out

White Writing comes up, one section at a time telling what happen to the students and Mrs. Anderson

The student from Cesar Chavez High School did alright for themselves... even after not going to college


Marcus became a world renowned hacker and works for the US government improving national security. His job involves trying to hack US security to improve future security. His yearly income is roughly 5 million.
Darrell found his dream job as a stunt double for a famous action movie star. He is in about three movies a year and works under one hundred days a year. He is married and has two sons and a daughter whom he spends his time with the other 265 days a year.
Jolu spends his time fighting for minority rights. His wife is serving her second term as a US senator. The two spend part of the year in Washington DC and the rest working in an orphanage in Honduras.
Van runs a soup kitchen in Oakland near where she grew up. She works mostly the teenagers and help them find purpose in there life’s.
Van and Marcus began dating during high school and married a few years later. They have a daughter and Van is currently pregnant with their second child.
Mrs. Anderson is retired from the public school system and living off her pension. She lives alone with her three cats. She has not family, no friends, and her pension is running low.

INT. Vans soup kitchen—Day time
Long shot of people in line to get food
Zoom in of Van serving food
Follow behind the shoulder of an old woman, walking though line until she reached to front where Van is serving food
Two shot of Van and the Woman, Van’s jaw drops when she releases it is Mrs. Anderson but serves her food anyways
When line moves Van talks over to Marcus and points out Mrs. Anderson

End Movie

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