Julia's Screenplay

I forgot how to make put a link on here but my screenplay is on my webpage. My screenplay is called Not So Severe. I titled it this because Severe Haircut Lady literally becomes not so severe at the end. The screenplay is a bit chick flickish but what guy doesn't like a little sensitivity once in a while, right?! I feel as though it might not be long enough for the minimum amount of time that the machinima is supposed to be but I added quite a bit of ad libbing and scenes without talking so I think that might be able to make up for the shorter amount of talking.