Tuesday, May 11, 2010

Kusi's Script

“YELLOW TWIST”



Written by

Kusi Peralta

FIRST DRAFT
May 10, 2010



"YELLOW TWIST"
1 BLACK SCREEN

MAIN TITLES
FADE IN:
INT. AN OLDER MARCUS YELLOW AT HIS HOUSE- DAY
Marcus is an old grandfather now. He is walking around his house from the living room to the front door. He is wearing a business suit and old brown loafers. The living room has a brown antique tone to it and looks relatively spotless except for a scrap of paper left from the trash his wife had taken out from their attic.
As Marcus bends over slowly to pick it up he reads “Don’t trust anyone over 25”. He gets a look on his face, the kind that people get when they immediately have a flashback of a memory from the past..

BLUR FADE OUT

SOUNDS OF SCREAMING AND RUNNING, CHAOS
FLASHING FADE IN:
EXT. MARKET STREET, SAN FRANCISCO- DAY
AFTER THE BOMB WENT OFF AND ALL THE CARS WERE DRIVING AROUND AND IT WAS CHAOTIC. DARRYL WAS JUST STABBED AND MARCUS TRIED TO FLAG DOWN AN UNMARKED ARMY JEEP. THIS IS IN THE BACKGROUND OF THE FLASHES.
FLASH ONE: GASP. DUST. BLURRY.
FLASH TWO: SCREAMS IN THE DISTANCE. SOUNDS OF PEOPLE RUNNING.
Marcus (shouting): “Guys?”
Vanessa (shouting muffled): Marcus run!
DARKNESS.

FADE IN:
MORE SCENES FROM THE BOOK + MADE UP ONES

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FLASH
FADE IN:
EXT. LARGE CROWD OF YOUNG PEOPLE CROWDING ON THE CORNER OF 20TH AND DOLORES- EVENING
Marcus and Ange are at the “Don’t trust anyone over the age of 25” concert. The young Marcus is on a date with Ange and they are flirtatious with each other. The crowd has a very energetic vibe. The artist, Trudy Doo, is performing and everyone is dancing around energetically. Most of the young kids have “Don’t trust anyone over 25” apparel and bright rave-looking clothing. They all start chanting after Trudy Doo starts saying “Don’t trust anyone over 25!”. This whole time Marcus has been looking around but when he turns to Ange the scene disappears…
FADE OUT QUICK

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FADE BACK TO BEGINNING SCENE:
Marcus realizes that somewhere on his path he lost his way. His old wrinkly face looks hurt and his eyes slightly teary eyed. During this whole flashback reminiscing time his driver had driven him to his work, the DHS. As executive director Marcus immediately starts reviewing rules that he needs to change in the sorority. All this time he’s gone wrong

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