screenplay ideas

I started out thinking i was going to do a similar screenplay to what i ended up with. after i changed a few things and made it alittle better with suggestions from classmates and ideas of my own i think i like my idea. my screenplay is going to be more comedic that a drama, however it is going to have some dramatic parts. The opening of my screenplay is going to show the scene of the vampire game. the main characters are not going to be marcus and van, it is instead going to be Nate and Liam (the two boys marcus later meets on the street who know him as mikey). Nate and liam start out at the vampire game talking about how cool mikey is and how fun this event was. they decided to leave when it got super crowded becuase they needed to get home. on their way home they run into and meet Marcus, and later bring him back to their house. This is when my scene will become different from little brother. Marcus asks them to go with him because he knows they will not be able to keep his secret without him watching them. this will be the conflict becuase marcus feels as though he will get caught without them with him because they will tell, and he will get caught if they are with him because they are not very smart. They go with him and end up helping him stop the dhs by distracting them while marcus is able to get the information to the newspaper.